Shade me with your life,
Best friend whom I only speak to when the wind opens your lips,
And rustles them into chatter,
We talk for hours,
As I sit beneath you urging to be of your stature,
But oh how moody you can be,
Attitude to match the season,
Changing sporadically,
Growing older,
Like me,
Old friend, good friend
Tree
- Inspired by Perhaps the World Ends Here by Joy Harpo
By JoVona Taylor 1st per
Thursday, May 6, 2010
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Great Imagery. I think that you really turned the tree into a powerful symbol.
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period 5
Good use of personification.
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Period 5
I honestly thought you were talking about a person or a parent with a child. I love this extended metaphor, lips and leaves. Also the personification a tree being moody with an attitude
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